Morgane Posted October 27, 2004 Report Posted October 27, 2004 wake up get up get dressed work a ghost walking work go home eat chat sleep wallpaper woman wake up get up get dressed work people see through me work go home eat chat sleep existance is futile
Appy Posted October 27, 2004 Report Posted October 27, 2004 *hugs* it's a good poem, simple, elegant, down to the point. I like it a lot, even though the message is depressing.. we'll get through it I'm sure *hugs again*
Peredhil Posted October 27, 2004 Report Posted October 27, 2004 Carefully takes a red crayon and draws a smile on the wallpaper woman of woes. Taking a peach crayon, he draws his eternal hug around her waist. Looking at the beauty and glory of the heart hidden within the woman With love and friendship he leaves her embraced. Well done Hon', and welcome back.
Morgane Posted October 27, 2004 Author Report Posted October 27, 2004 (edited) in case somebody doesn't get the connection here is a link to one of my favourite stories:) appy found it for me;) thanx sweet! hopefully working link Edited October 27, 2004 by Morgane
YanYanGanaffi Posted October 28, 2004 Report Posted October 28, 2004 I love how you capture the virtual prison of daily route so very well. I like it.
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