Saya Cinta Kamu

[Until_It_Sleeps]

Saya Cinta Kamu

 

Moonlight cascading; Illuminating the passengers seat,

Black fabrics meshing; Focused into a subtle backdrop,

To highlight her brown hair; The radiance of her skin,

Staring upon her like sailors search the nights stars,

Lost in the mysteries clouding her cacao brown eyes,

Her lips lusher than the entangled jungle he explores,

But modernization yet again raises it's luminousity,

Glares of headlights offering a flash to his future,

Unable to focus and see what lies ahead in his path,

When the green signs all point to the wrong directions,

 

A stolen glance to his right; Her beauty still present,

Fear and bordom syphoning away at their receeding morale,

Longing to extend a hand; To embrace what he most desires,

But the borders of seperation expand their domains,

 

Fingers outstretched; Clockwise turns to the volume dial,

Hands shaking; The tremors buried beneath rubber wheels,

If only he could catch just a fraction of her attention,

His image as eluded as the car in this calm evenings haze,

Beyond mist and uncertainty her silohette remains clear,

A white sweatshirt glistening brighter than the arctic sun,

With a face of beauty, That was only rivalled by her body,

Nothing else mattered; Except for her as the fog rolled in,

Contemplating destinations; Never allowing the nights end.

 

Diamond yellow signs warning "Danger: Slippery when wet",

Placed too far along the winding freeways rocky shoulder,

Stripped tire treads weren't enough to persuade inevibility,

Gaurdrails gained proximity as the right view mirror stole his focus,

Her image consumed his perceptions of what lie in their wake,

As the words "Objects In Mirror May Be Closer Than They Appear",

Framed her image, And concentrated it so clearly into his eyes,

Her brown iris's collided and locked; Indirectly yet assuringly,

As he eased the car back into the median of the freeway.

 

 

I made this pretty strange and obscure, just to get a new plot that hasn't really been done before. Feedback definitely welcomed.

Edited September 30, 2004 by Until_It_Sleeps

[Xaious, Master of Time]

Absolutely wonderful craftsmanship. Not quite clear on exactly what happens at the end, but I feel I can appreciate the vagueness of it. Definitely worth the read. I suppose I can best describe it's affect to me as 'addictively descriptive'.

I love it, good one.