_Zen_ Posted September 13, 2004 Report Posted September 13, 2004 i look across at eyes looking down they look down on purpose avoiding looking back at me but it only makes the situation worse ive faked so many smiles a wink, and a sly smirk on my face but she knows what im thinking the look is all out of place i sip a beer, the awful taste preoccupies my mind im searching my brain for a topic but theres nothing i can find trivial 4 word conversations seem to make up the bulk of today and theres so much to talk about but i just cant seem to find the way her answers are short she knows shes being curt shes so unapologetic and she knows thats one thing i love about her once in a while she fakes a smile she winks, and gives a grin but im sure we're both wondering if our friendship is running thin anyday but today, it would never have crossed my mind now all of a sudden shes cold or maybe its just that shes tired? and i think back to yesterday any other time but right now and im not sure why this happened im not sure what, and how ad everytime i close my eyes im transported back in time and a deep breath of air fills me enough for another forced smile and i know this is just a blip on a long radar of our relationship and tomorrow will be fun again but damned if i dont miss her right now.
Guest Morbid Angel Posted September 15, 2004 Report Posted September 15, 2004 hey! i really liked this. interesting set up and way with words. i thought it has a very interesting effect on the readers mind. AWESOME! Morbid Angel
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