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The Pen is Mightier than the Sword

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You have so many secrets,

Hidden in your soul,

Locked away from everyone.

 

Why keep secrets from your friend?

Would it hurt to let me in?

 

Such pain lies within your eyes,

Your dreams make you scream,

Would it really hurt to talk?

 

It helps to discuss your pain,

Makes it easier to end.

 

It takes one word to end things,

One word to release,

You should not bear it alone.

 

Stop writing stories for now,

Let me in just this one time.

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A very nice theme. I enjoyed this very much. Touches on several very interesting questions. Ones own sense of self worth, a persons past experience with close relationships and their sense of trust. All those things and more. I have the visual of you extending your hand to a person drowning but it's their decision to take it or continue to struggle on their own.

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