_Zen_ Posted August 28, 2004 Report Posted August 28, 2004 however many tales you told me i always could accept the things that happened before me i didnt need you to regret now im faced with a new test something here and now and im trying hard to let it go although i dont know how maybe i was foolish to think you'd change for me or maybe i assumed too much about how this was going to be and then i hear your sobbing and i forgive you in a second i thought i thought of everything but this i hadnt reckoned and now i hear the details now im not angry, but sad that someone who you trust would dare treat you so bad and i wish this hadnt happened and i know that you do too and im trying to ignore it but its so hard to do i have no ground to stand on you're not even mine but you're not surprised by my silence on the line but its not enough to make me let go of you maybe it is something that i was supposed to go through a little taste of reality when my head's up in the clouds im not going to let go of you but i'll let you bring me back down.
Mynx Posted August 28, 2004 Report Posted August 28, 2004 Nicely written. good even rhythm and I felt the emotions in the piece. Makes me think of a song I've recently come across... "...and I know you'll catch me when I'm falling" ~Catch Me - MIC~ ...Tralala...
Parmenion Posted September 10, 2004 Report Posted September 10, 2004 Excellent work Zen. It paints a very vivid picture to the reader of the hopeless situation of a friend who yearns to aid another friend with troubles of their past with the knowledge that all they can offer is the comfort of their friendship against the storm of bad memories. And sometimes thats all a person needs. Well done
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