purple_shadows Posted August 22, 2004 Report Posted August 22, 2004 Hate is a powerful emotion that Once felt is hard to let go I felt it once Twisting inside me Consuming my soul But I no longer have the capacity to hate It gives you too much credit And so I let it go There once was a time when I loved you And when your façade shattered Revealing the lie underneath I hated you Because of the image I just couldn’t see And I walked away Shattered, and broken, and weak Down the twisted path of solitude Rebuilding my life, and my strength But I could never be whole And so my step faltered My hatred towards you became Too heavy a burden to bear I could feel it changing me into Everything you had been And so I dropped it Although it didn’t want to let go I left it behind me And while I’ll never forget what you did I won’t remember it either You’re just not worth the hate anymore
Mynx Posted August 22, 2004 Report Posted August 22, 2004 Wow... Very emotive. I like very much. And I can sympathise with the emotions... Nicely done.
Peredhil Posted August 22, 2004 Report Posted August 22, 2004 Hate is a serpent which seeps venom, Always most damaging to the self. The target walks free, unscathed, Even as the serpent twists, In pain from its own poisons. Love for me never lets me free; Eternally I am vulnerable in my heart. There-in lies the rub you see - I find that love is not enough. That a relationship needs balance and flow. Given that relationships end in reality, Obviously I must take my pain, and Hurt. I let it go.
BlackCagedHeart Posted August 26, 2004 Report Posted August 26, 2004 Again, b-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l. I can't be in the same room as such talent! ::scurries away:: BlackCagedRunaway Haha
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