Guest Morbid Angel Posted August 18, 2004 Report Posted August 18, 2004 I was born to fail, But that's ok. All I do is run and bail, Atleast that's what they say. My father doesn't care, My brother's are drunks. Not one is brave enough to dare, To try to be something other than punks. I'm the wrench thrown in the gears, Everything was great. Then i came here, But it's alright mate. I've got one foot stuck in the gutter, The other in my grave. I make your stomache flutter, Just hold on and be brave. The worst is yet to come, You thought you'd seen it all. Just hide behind your mum, And becareful that you don't fall! The dark child is on the scene, You haven't seen anything like this before. No one so twisted and mean, So rotted and cold at the core. Morbid Angel
Parmenion Posted August 20, 2004 Report Posted August 20, 2004 I always enjoy readin your poems Morbid Angel. There is a certain alluring quality to the way in which you write. If only I had more time to browse these forums I would have caught them all (your poems). [q]I've got one foot stuck in the gutter, The other in my grave. I make your stomache flutter, Just hold on and be brave.[/q] Is a stroke of genius. What great lines these are! Born to fail, Its not okay, Weak and frail, In winds of time we sway. Though fathers may swear, Some brothers are skunks We still love and care, For we're more than mere punks! Wrench thrown in the gears, To play around with fate, But to allay your fears, We offer love, not hate. Born in the gutter, Will end in the grave, We stumble and stutter, And some souls we do save. Over years we doth come, Across time we do call, Not to wise nor to dumb, But to those who do fall... Even where darkness has been, There are stars at its core, Marking lightly the nightly scene... One we have visit-ed before. *hugs*
BlackCagedHeart Posted August 26, 2004 Report Posted August 26, 2004 My morbid friend!!!!!! I love it!!!!! It reminds me of the song "Dressed to Depress" By the Murderdolls. Inspiration possibility here?? HAHA. Anyways...Lovely little poem here! <love> BlackCagedHeart
Guest Morbid Angel Posted August 26, 2004 Report Posted August 26, 2004 Indeed, "Dressed to depress" was my source of inspiration! well done for picking that! Morbid Angel
DarkPainInside Posted August 30, 2004 Report Posted August 30, 2004 (edited) SINCE WHEN R U TWISTED AND MEAN??? ........not that i feel i could understand........ nice work tho MurderDolls....hmmm Nashie loved this...lol damn talented friends. lol cya. Edited August 30, 2004 by DarkPainInside
BlackCagedHeart Posted September 6, 2004 Report Posted September 6, 2004 I rock....j/k. I just love that song, so I knew right away. BlackCagedHeart
DarkPainInside Posted September 13, 2004 Report Posted September 13, 2004 (edited) :woot: MurderDolls are good. you have to be in the right mood for them though I think! I think this poem is great, Morbid, but i still disagree with the last line…. Edited September 13, 2004 by DarkPainInside
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