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Granted, the truth about this topic isn't as vivid or anything, but I figured it made a good rock song, so I wrote it out 'cause the line Tiffany, Tiffany, what the hell'd ya do to me stuck in my head all day. Anyway tho.

 

Tiffany, Tiffany

What the hell'd ya do to me

Never seemed to disagree

And I wondered if you loved me

 

Tiffany, Tiffany

I was only seventeen

Took my heart away from me

And locked it up without a key

 

(Chorus)

I was so down trodden

You took me far away

Even if it was only a moment

You stuck with me in my dreams

 

Tiffany, Tiffany

Why'd you have to go and leave

Why do I really wanna grieve

I never really spoke my peace

 

Tiffany, Tiffany

To a very large degree

You meant something more to me

Than what you really seemed to be

 

(chorus 2)

I couldn't stop my feelings

I never wanted to be alone

You showed me a part of heaven

But you left me all alone

 

(Instrumental)

 

Tiffany, Tiffany

You left me all alone to bleed

You meant something more to me

Why'd you leave, Tiffany?

 

 

Just so everyone is clear here, it's supposed to be sung in a very nirvanaish tone, lots of grunge guitar and fast pace, like Breed or something along those lines. I like it. Yay.

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Hey! I like it also, it's very good.

 

I wonder where you got the name Tiffany from? I like the way you use it, and I read it trying to imagine the cadence that you used. Obviously I probably read it wrongly, but The way I heard it I liked it. I also liked the theme you used, and the message the words conveyed.

 

I hope that someday you record this as it's supposed to be played and then I can listen to it in real time :D

 

Well done!

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