An Ode to my sorrows

[Vigil StarGazer]

Been trying, like a fool

while you're already taken;

thought to have a chance with you

but reality bound for a crude awaken.

 

My love for her gone to waste

love often leads to such astray.

 

and Ode to you,

a prayer for everything I do,

but I, freak and stranger

deserves no love but repugnance

 

Chances are my love won't survive

eternal loneliness then shall be mine.

 

Only Lady Misery by my side

against fate my anger won't subside

now as my dream slowly fades to black

The Dark Mysterious Figure is back.

 

I'm back.

[Peredhil]

Yay!

I'm always happy to see you post.

Good expression of feeling in the poem, although if you expect the relationship to fail, it tends to make it happen faster. Or at least, in my experience with that perception filtering.

Awkward rhyme with "awaken" instead of "awakening". Maybe rework it?

 

Welcome back.