disizmrkent Posted July 26, 2004 Report Posted July 26, 2004 It's been a while since I have posted on here. And my last post definitely had a little bit of opinion that came with it. But I have had a good time with life, and I've gone back to my more romantic side. I hope you enjoy it. Post a comment, and let me know....... My mind had kept me captive. My dreams had me locked up inside. I felt helpless, left breathless, and drowning below the rising tide. Until you came into my life with love, and gave me what I was trying to find. So now my tears are gone; not a single, salty one, exsists. And now I chase you through those dreams while you smile and laugh as I persist. And we laugh and fall into each other's arms, Lost in our love, and sealed with a kiss.
purple_shadows Posted July 30, 2004 Report Posted July 30, 2004 This really flowed well to me. It was nice and light,easy to read, and it made me smile. All in all, I enjoyed it very much.
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