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The Pen is Mightier than the Sword

to Tami, the nymph


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could it be that i've felt it, and yet not said;

those evenings together when we lied in bed.

 

tami, i'm falling for you.

 

did you know all along, the way that i felt?

and played your hand the way it was dealt.

 

tami, reassure me.

 

and now that i know, what thorns your rose bears,

could you be kind, and answer my prayers?

 

tami, be with me.

 

now i know it wont be a walk in the park,

but theres something special when we're alone in the dark.

 

tami, I want you.

 

my passion, and happiness in being with you,

could never be questioned as being untrue.

 

tami, I need you.

 

so reply to this passionate shepherd's plea,

if you're the one nymph that i think you may be.

 

tami, call me.

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I liked this; it was sweet and simple. The single lines helped the rhyme from seeming constricting and repetitive and made the poem fall into a good rhythm for me.

 

I especially like the last line, it was a slight surprise and I finished the poem with a smile on my face. :)

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