Ozymandias Posted June 18, 2004 Report Posted June 18, 2004 working hard and falling, stumbling I straighten myself up only to trip again I straighten myself up tumble and it hurts quite bad I catch my foot on a rock, winding and narrow sometimes cloudy sometimes bright the path I work my way along I climb, stride, run, crawl sometimes together sometimes alone I follow this path that I have chosen I started it seems so long ago that one bright day
Parmenion Posted June 19, 2004 Report Posted June 19, 2004 Scrabbling our way through life while being constantly challenged and tripped up throughout. An apt portrayal. But would we wouldn't have it any other way
Ozymandias Posted June 20, 2004 Author Report Posted June 20, 2004 My thanks, Parm. Coming from you, that's high praise. Wanted to add a note I realized I rather should, though: The poem is actually a palindrome; read it left to right from title to final line, and you see one version. Read it from end line left to right, up to the title, and you get another.
Ayshela Posted June 20, 2004 Report Posted June 20, 2004 *giggles* and perverse person that i am (or maybe it's the fever) i think i like the backwards version better
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