Arashi Posted June 14, 2004 Report Posted June 14, 2004 Underneath The puzzle Face-Paint You look into the mirror Trying to find yourself again Taking the first piece of the puzzle Putting it on to conceal yourself It makes you feel beautiful But it makes you look plastic and fake The second piece is added with care Over the eyes for a shinny effect To hypnotize the masses Into a lustful sinful train of thought Just by looking at them They fall prey to that intoxicating view The third piece is placed Covering up all of the crap you say With a luscious red smile And a smell to tickle the senses All the while tempting the bull To rush head first into the storm These pieces all form the puzzle But in the end You look worse then you started And you feel weighed down While underneath you scream To be let out of your cage You never really knew That your beauty has been hiding Underneath the puzzle face-paint ______________________________ Smile You say I could do better But I disagree I don't want to do better I don't believe I can You say you are sorry But there is no reason to be It is not your fault No one can help how they feel You smile I love it when you do You speak as though everything is alright But I do not believe it You smile again and turn away Slowly moving down that road of darkness Blindly moving forward Towards that light at the end of the tunnel I pray that when you reach the end You find what it was you were looking for And I hope that what you find makes you happy Happier then when you were with me You turn back and look at me And then you smile And move on down the road
Beautiful Nightmare Posted June 15, 2004 Report Posted June 15, 2004 Ok on the first poem i really like it i know people like that who try hide who thy are with make up some of them try to hide there sadness with it because it makes them feel better somehow i never understood those people! But i really like it and i love the way it flows my favorite is the first verse i love it well done!! On the second poem-Smile. Its a rather sad poem very touching too! I would hate to be in a situation like that and to be honest i dunno if i could be happy for them but i suppose what else can you do? Again i love it i think you are a very skilled writter i love you poems!!!!
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