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Tormented by the thoughts of lost love

I again wander down the hall of dreams

Dreams left to smolder out and die

Looking upon them in alarming dismay

I think of all the dreams I lost

Lost and forgotten all because of "love"

The dreams of my childhood reduced to ash

Laying dead and hopeless on the floor

Tears streaming down my cheeks

I kneel down naked and exposed

Exposed to my own murdered dreams

I turn and look back down the hall

Into the eyes that helped me kill them

And she smiles back into my soul

It was for your own good she says still smiling

I examine her once more

Then turn back to my dreams and weep

I point at her and show her the exit

The exit from my world

My heart

And my love

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Powerful emotions and very well expressed.

 

Half way through this I found a hook that grabbed me and wouldn't let me go.

 

 

I turn and look back down the hall

Into the eyes that helped me kill them

And she smiles back into my soul

It was for your own good she says still smiling

I examine her once more

Then turn back to my dreams and weep

I point at her and show her the exit

The exit from my world

My heart

And my love

 

 

Self examination perhaps?

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