purple_shadows Posted May 30, 2004 Report Posted May 30, 2004 Look at me Dark hair And light skin And bright eyes Grinning like an idiot Acting the fool Why am I here? I stand before you Short But straight And proud And broken I will not move I will be strong I will wait And hear your answer I chose to let you in And there’s no going back again
Arashi Posted June 4, 2004 Report Posted June 4, 2004 Very nice poem PS. But what can I say, I've liked all of your poetry so far.
Regel Posted June 5, 2004 Report Posted June 5, 2004 Very interesting poem. It smells of youth. The hope, the courage, the decision to stand (flaws and all) to await an answer. I enjoyed it alot.
Beautiful Nightmare Posted June 12, 2004 Report Posted June 12, 2004 I think nearly all of your poetry i have been able to relate to in someway and nothing has changed with this poem! I know how vunerable it feels to let someone in and i know is not a nice feeling awaiting the stab in the vack but hey it turned out well for me in the end so i wish you the best!
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