Falcon2001 Posted May 27, 2004 Report Posted May 27, 2004 Roll - You got a 6 Paradigm shift, paradigm shift What's that? Things are different? I adjust. Shuffle, pile, cut, draw Assign a new value - the remainder is rounded. Re-assign. I prefer redheads. What? Returning? Check discard pile - status How can she? Her value is hate. I assigned it myself. Women = evil. Sheet confirms She remembers? Value is incorrect Does she remember? She broke my machine Error in sector 4. Reassigning variables. into a million pieces. I tried to make her fit but new sheet needed, processing she was so different. Beauty. Beauty = eye of beholder. Does she remember that day? accessing memory - unlocking When we explored each other's bodies level 5 security - unlocking When we kissed with hungry mouths and explored places we had yet to see? Does it burn inside her? error in shift.dll, reassessing values Like it does inside me? Should I call? Or leave her be alone? Life is different. Confusion. Paradigm shift complete. Have a nice day.
Ayshela Posted May 27, 2004 Report Posted May 27, 2004 oh, wonderful!!! *makes mental note to come back to this with a bit more available time* beautifully interwoven, point and counterpoint, contemplation and consequence. excellently done!
Katzaniel Posted May 27, 2004 Report Posted May 27, 2004 Wow. I'm not sure exactly what it means, but it evokes an emotion for almost every line. Beautifully written, Falcon.
Alaeha Posted May 28, 2004 Report Posted May 28, 2004 Fascinating. Not the typical read. The italicized bits were interesting. I wasn't sure for a while whether you were talking about D&D, Magic, or some computer or another. Definitely an interesting experiment. Fun to read, but partly because it's not the typical read, I think.
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