Ch3rry D0om Posted April 20, 2004 Report Posted April 20, 2004 well one of my friends told me about this place and i thought i'd share. feel free to pick apart the badness of them. ^__^ -This Moonshines- The moon shines so bright In this room of mine Crying tears of pain I wonder if i belong If i can still feel The moon shining on me Brings me a fallen star Carressing my face Of banishment and shame Of what i've done This moon shining so bright In this room of mine Reminds me of my faults All i've done wrong To deserve this empty soul Pain and suffering That i can't let go of Through this moon Shining so bright I can feel the hurt I have brought on myself The past that haunts me This moon shining so bright In this room of mine Tells me what i am And what I'll never become -Frozen- Your love is a distraction From my enternal pain Horrible tears of shame Cover my dying flame Your love is a question That never gets answered So i hide away Maybe i will know another day Screaming inside my skin I'm locked away, away I shed another bleeding tear To lose you, i fear. I'm frozen in time Sinking in my own puddle That the rain brought me Something, something you could never give me This sin drowns my soul Black storms follow my step Death came to play With my heart today I am alone again Mirrors of insanity circle me Im a lost little girl Afraid to see the world. -Get Away- My soul is dark, black with filth The voices surround, and i hear nothing This heart hurts, broken with guilt My lungs grow tight, stops my breathing Alone in this corner, i sit Await the day it will come When the last pedal of the rose falls And i'll no longer have to run. These wounds never seem to heal From this clutched fist of sorrow This fate you gave, unreal Ghost rise, above the shadows. The path is misleading throughout Screaming in your grave, i hurt It's my fault, for this shame There's no one else but me to blame Is it too late? To dig through, out this hole This rain refills my emotion Now it is too full. The moon shines, brightening the night I'm scared, locked in my fright I want to escape, get away from here But for you, for you i'll face my fears. The end. *bows*
purple_shadows Posted April 20, 2004 Report Posted April 20, 2004 I really liked the last one best. Especially the last line. But for you, for you i'll face my fears. I think we've all felt that at some point in our lives. You might want to separate the first poem out into stanzas, it would make it a bit more reader friendly. anyways. glad you decided to give the pen a try. Keep writting.
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