Avanlanche

[Oldfox]

Here's a really short poem that i wrote during a late night of drinking...

 

Avalanche

 

I guess I didn't know that

you were an avalanche,

when I stepped into you.

 

Muffled sounds of destruction

as you covered me up

until I couldnt move.

And it felt good,

not freezing to death.

but to slowly suffocate.

from you

[HopperWolf]

strikes me as remarkably good lyric material, especially the first stanza. Like the phrasing. nice