Falcon2001 Posted April 13, 2004 Report Posted April 13, 2004 This poem is based upon, and uses lines from a poem by Yeats I believe. I saw it in a movie, and it really stuck with me. Poorly fitted with gusty clothes I have not materials with which to praise All I have are my dreams Having naught, I spread my dreams before you Patchworks of bravery and deceit Hallowed and sacred in somber tones Every step crushes what once I hoped The roses that bore the seed of labor Flowers of dawn that break forth in colors I give up this, that I posess So that you may pass undirtied I soil my dreams to keep you pure Tread gently, dear, for you tread upon my dreams. Walk with a gentle step, for they are my wealth.
Rahsash Geldich Posted April 13, 2004 Report Posted April 13, 2004 Very sweet, and it sounds like a lullaby. Sad, but not too much. Kinda like a gentle rain... Okay, so its rainy outside and it puts me in a drifty mood, he he.
purple_shadows Posted April 13, 2004 Report Posted April 13, 2004 Makes for a good song too. *starts memorizing words so she can sing it everywhere she goes.* lol.
Beautiful Nightmare Posted April 16, 2004 Report Posted April 16, 2004 I love this its very sweet and has something calming and lullaby like about it *sings alog with purple_shadows*
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