Appy Posted March 6, 2004 Report Posted March 6, 2004 (edited) Please be silent don't say a word I cannot concentrate on what you are saying. Mindless babbling; uninteresting matters A frown on my forehead for having to ask you again what you said or what you really meant Arguing about nothing Annoyance with wording Increasing distance on every syllable But be silent don't say a word I'm concentrating on us touching. Feelings close in; only you matter A smile on my lips for experiencing warmth again from your body or your breath on my cheek Tranquility, doing nothing Relaxing without a word Increasing closeness with every touch ..I love you who is my rock; my safety lock; in every storm of emotions.. [06 maart 2004, Leverkusen] Edited October 20, 2014 by Appy
WrenWind Posted March 6, 2004 Report Posted March 6, 2004 *smiles* Tranquility, doing nothing Relaxing without a word Something that is so very hard to do but so rewarding when you can. I liked this very much Appy.
Appy Posted March 8, 2004 Author Report Posted March 8, 2004 (edited) ~ thank you, and you are so right! Been revising a little, tell me what you think! Biggest change is the last few lines.. ~RockPleasebe silentdon't say a wordI cannot concentrateon What you are saying..Mindless babbling;uninteresting mattersA frown on my foreheadfor having to ask youagain what you saidor what you really meantArguing about nothingAnnoyance through wordingIncreasing distancewith every syllableButbe silentdon't say a wordI'm concentratingon us touching..Feelings close in;only you mattersA smile on my lipsfor experiencing warmthagain from your bodyor your breath on my cheekTranquility, doing nothingRelaxing without a wordIncreasing closenesswith every touch..I love youmy solid rockand safety lock;in every storm of emotions..[08 maart 2004, Leverkusen]~ PS: I would still like to change the title... but can't come up with a better one.. any suggestions? ~ Edited October 20, 2014 by Appy
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