disizmrkent Posted March 4, 2004 Report Posted March 4, 2004 If I had dreams come true to me my world would not be this empty my life would have direction and meaning and death would not be tempting If I had love inside my heart my world would glow and shine but now I sit in the shadows of truth and the only fault there is, is mine I sit and wonder, lay back and ponder was there more I missed along the way? Could life have passed me by so fast that I didn't see it run away? I throw back my head, and look to God and wonder who is now forsaken why does he tempt me so much, so hard and why have I not been taken Why do I sit on an earth I don't belong to why can't I leave and find my place But as I ask the questions I have I'm interrupted by rain on my face So still I sit, and I cry, for I'm lost but I can't let the world see my tear Because so long they've taken advantage of me and of all the times they've seen my fear....
X-Sabre Posted March 5, 2004 Report Posted March 5, 2004 Wow, really deep man. Really smooth flow in the poem and you express your emotions quite vividly. Great job.
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