purple_shadows Posted February 25, 2004 Report Posted February 25, 2004 The wind picked up while I was standing outside, alone in the courtyard, surrounded by people. And I raised my arms to the sky, let it pass through me, caressing me. She said I looked as if I could fly, but where would I go to? And the wind stopped, and I forgot, and I danced in the rain. But the cold only made me colder, and the blood froze in my veins.
Ayshela Posted February 26, 2004 Report Posted February 26, 2004 i really like this, for a multitude of reasons. wind caressing - beautifully evocative. alone in the courtyard, surrounded by people. isn't this one of the loneliest of feelings? She said I looked as if I could fly, but where would I go to? an excellent question, dropped into the middle of a fluidly descriptive moment.
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