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Posted

;) This is kinda crap concidering i have one thing on my mind ***JASSETTE*** but i made this song up from nothing no emotion or anything so tell me if ya think its crap :) Peace

 

Price To Pay

 

One grim day,

I faulted you,

And now im ready to pay,

For what i have done,

 

Chorus

 

Now Im Ready To Pay!

Twisting in my head,

Everything you Said,

Twisting Out Of Control,

Im ready to pay!!!

 

Save us from Hate,

Save us from Fate,

Save ourselves,

Before it’s too late.

 

Chorus

 

The Price I pay,

Twisting in my head,

Everything you Said,

Twisting Out Of Control,

Ive paid for my faults!!!!

Posted

*hugs* hahaha yey get me off your mind for a while and expand your writting to other things :) its really good hun stop saying everything your writting is crap please there is no need because you are really good at writting you just cant see! You need to build up that confidance babe and relise that not everything about you it bad! I especialy love the verse:

Save us from Hate,

Save us from Fate,

Save ourselves,

Before it’s too late##

 

 

:rolleyes:

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