1/5/04

[purple_shadows]

Have you ever had the feeling,

That something’s just not right?

Like everywhere you look,

Something’s hidden out of sight?

 

Have you ever sat and wondered,

What makes the world tick?

Of all the little small things,

And large things made of brick?

 

How far will life take you,

When you ride this train of thought?

Will you find a new life,

Only to miss one you forgot?

 

All things will diminish,

And time can only tell,

If you will find true happiness

It’s better not to dwell.

 

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I'm just a little distracted, if you couldn't already tell. I dunno, my absence of thought seemed to be the inspiration of this....only not. And i'm probably just confusing you as well as myself. so, I hope you enjoyed it, if nothing else.

[Appy]

Keep distracted! *giggle*

 

 

Seriously, this almost summed up my life for a long time.. dwelling on the little and big things of life, dwelling on the past (something I still do but shouldn't)

 

I would quote a favorite part but that would mean quoting the whole poem.. so I won't

 

Oh ok, don't look at me like that, I will quote! *giggle*

 

How far will life take you,

When you ride this train of thought?

Will you find a new life,

Only to miss one you forgot?

For most people likely to be the most confusing part, for me, it's definatly the scariest... I don't like missing anything, specially if you forgot what you're missing (something you *kinda* defined well in your first stanza I thought) ... very nicely summed up fear this.

 

 

In short, Thank you for sharing this and I just have to say it again, stay distracted please, this was excellent! *hugs*

Edited February 6, 2004 by Appy

[purple_shadows]

*hugs* thanks. Its fun to write like that, and its always a nice feeling to be distracted, and yet have something come out of it. odd, but nice.