DoomGaze Posted January 23, 2004 Report Posted January 23, 2004 These Iced Tears ============== Gazing at the stars, here alone in the cold My emotions shiver within the dark. I try to grasp the things I wished to hold, But my world has become oh so stark. A cloud of sorrow hovers over me Like a lost child with nowhere to go. It follows just to mock me As these iced tears start to flow. I wake the next day to feel dead inside, The tears have not gone away. It's been years since I've first cried, And ever since, I've felt so afraid. So now I wait, For these iced tears to melt. Maybe one day, but not too late, Then I can hold the feelings I've never felt.
Beautiful Nightmare Posted January 23, 2004 Report Posted January 23, 2004 *hugs* omg such an excellent poem!!!!
Falcon2001 Posted January 23, 2004 Report Posted January 23, 2004 Excellent bit of work, Doom. I especially liked the second stanza with the cloud bit. Very good.
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