Ayshela Posted January 19, 2004 Report Posted January 19, 2004 With full apologies for taking a lovely turn of phrase and running with it - Dawn's Children Brilliant colours paint the sky pink and gold, lavender blue, idly wondering once more why they'd missed these darkest hours too. Deepest velvet black, the night blankets all terrestrial shapes until in morning's vivid light velvet turns to mist wraith drapes. Never shall dawn's children dance in vivid swirls of coloured light beneath the moon's impartial glance, for dawn must always follow night.
Loki Wyrd Posted January 19, 2004 Report Posted January 19, 2004 Very nicely done. I'm always happy if someone can take something from what I've written, it means at least part of it has some redeeming qualities. Thanks for the compliment. :woot:
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