Spiders Soul Posted January 18, 2004 Report Posted January 18, 2004 In a place of darkness, a dream of light lives the old order is trying to keep the curtains drawn, to keep out tomorrow, but a new day is dawning the future is rushing in. Will you be there to meet it?
Loki Wyrd Posted January 19, 2004 Report Posted January 19, 2004 I certainly will not, I'll be safely tucked away in bed. Kind of a strange way you have this set up. The second line seems rather long, but it would seem that it is as you intended, so I'm sure you knew what you were doing with it.
Spiders Soul Posted January 19, 2004 Author Report Posted January 19, 2004 Well its not really a poem just a little snip lit thats cute, well I thought it was cute when I finished it. and I was not sure where to put it and this seemed the best place
Loki Wyrd Posted January 19, 2004 Report Posted January 19, 2004 That's what I figured, it's all good. By the way, I have too much time on my hands as well.
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