Jesse Posted January 17, 2004 Report Posted January 17, 2004 Wouldn't it be nice If your life could just go If you could just press 'delete' And all memories out throw? Wouldn't it be good Instead of letting out a scream To use the little button 'delete' To get rid of a bad dream? And if it could be used That little button called 'delete' Would I then be sitting here Writing on this sheet?
Loki Wyrd Posted January 18, 2004 Report Posted January 18, 2004 How is it that you have 0 posts by your name, yet here I am reading one of your posts? It's an interesting topic you chose to write about. Your first stanza seems a little out of sorts, you may want to try rewording it a little. I could offer some suggestions if you'd like. Good 2nd stanza though.
Vlad Posted January 19, 2004 Report Posted January 19, 2004 I like this; my mind created an image of things getting tossed in the Windows "Recycle Bin".
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