Kendricke Posted January 2, 2004 Report Posted January 2, 2004 Boundless in the way I feel today tomorrow feels new and fresh and nervous. Stories shared between two pasts futures linked together but not Gazes exchanged so quick then there fleeting peeks hiding again Walking aimlessly wandering here there strides searching and finding
HopperWolf Posted January 2, 2004 Report Posted January 2, 2004 hey kendricke, excellent work. I enjoyed reading and the theme was a joy to explore. The only thing I can suggest is that you pick up the structure a little and get a bit more consistancy.
Peredhil Posted January 2, 2004 Report Posted January 2, 2004 Hail and well-met again M'Lord! I like the repetition/combinations - today tomorrow, pasts futures, then there - they read well. It's really good to see you post here again. Dances a hug to the big K
Loki Wyrd Posted January 3, 2004 Report Posted January 3, 2004 Interesting structure. I particularly enjoyed the last stanza.
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