the time i fell in love with mother theresa

[_Zen_]

its been a while since i've posted anything. just wanted to say hi to appy, and wren and arwen, and thank you ladies for being nice to me and supporting me.

 

i had a girl once,

her skin was a light cup:

of coffee

i knew her well then,

i used to know what she would think:

beforehand

and to see her?

that was to know everything:

of beauty

oh, but to know her...

that was to feel everything:

of beauty

i slept in her arms,

and even then i dreampt:

only of her

and i woke to a surprise,

that i had slept so soundly:

without a stir

but a time came,

when she had to lead me back:

to the real world

and even then,

i can honestly say that i never:

truly returned.

[WrenWind]

i really like this .... like waking up out of a dream still there but not quite at the same time

 

*hugs*

[Beautiful Nightmare]

Its really good zen i like it alot! *hugs* missed you!

[Vlad]

This is good, I like how it flows.

Took me a few erad-throughs to get the full meaning, but that's cool.

 

Welcome back.

[Zen]

this is odd. we have the same name...lol um I enjoyed your poem and its sort of peter pan never land type feel to it.