Vlad Posted December 20, 2003 Report Posted December 20, 2003 A blank room, Lacking any feeling. A blank look, Lacking any meaning. One debate, with many points. Two opposing sides. Three hours of headaches. Four long speeches. Five endless rounds. A fiery locale, Conveying much feeling. A fiery glance, Conveying much meaning. Endless schedules- Long-winded babbling- Hourly agonies- Opposing emotions- Entwine into One. Thanks to Wyvern for being a sound board which I can bounce ideas and revisions off of.
Beautiful Nightmare Posted December 30, 2003 Report Posted December 30, 2003 I really like your rhyming thing uhhh dont mind me i cannot think of words tonight bad headache but i saw this without any replys and wondered why such a good poem was left unreplyed to hmmmm its a mystery very good poem i like it keep them coming!
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