X-Sabre Posted December 7, 2003 Report Posted December 7, 2003 Forever within a minute, a moment lost to all eternity. A movie scene that has been cut, full of unbridled possibility.
Loki Wyrd Posted December 7, 2003 Report Posted December 7, 2003 Nice...and short - my favorite kind! I like your new customized title, very befitting.
X-Sabre Posted December 8, 2003 Author Report Posted December 8, 2003 Yeah, I wanted to do it longer, but I was just like.. uhhh..I'm lost. so.. there ya go.
Loki Wyrd Posted December 8, 2003 Report Posted December 8, 2003 Sometimes making them longer just turns them into crap. So there's nothing wrong with keeping them short.
Yuki Kokoro Posted December 8, 2003 Report Posted December 8, 2003 I like it too, both the rhythm and the message. Very concise; I like the way it expresses an idea then lets the reader figure out its implications.
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