My dear sweet mother

[Yatsuna13]

Oh mother,

my dear sweet mother,

with eyes of blu

and hair of brown.

Your heart,

filled with love

Your mind,

crammed with happiness.

 

Yet i know,

behind all that.

Those blue eyes,

that brown hair,

lies something torn,

something missing.

Bitter sadness

slowly takes over.

 

Know that i love you.

My dear sweet mother

let these words

speak louder than actions

for words,

will be all you have left.

Bring my love with you,

and i will do the same

[Mira]

And here I was thinking this was going to be a really happy poem. You tricked me, but thats o.k. thought, because it was still very good. We often forget the pain of our parents because they are suppose to be the strength that holds us up when ours has failed.

 

I'm shure there is some sort of deeper personal meaning here that I'm not even gona try to figure out.

 

I liked it.

[Yuki Kokoro]

Great poem, I like the way your thoughts come out so clearly.

 

It's like that with so many people and it's painful to see. I for one never know what to do with anybody who's hurting inside like that; it's even harder with parents. At least you let her know you love her.

[Yatsuna13]

thnx for replying...yes itdoes have a deeper meaning. to me it is hard to know the pan of aparent,especially a mother. it's almost like you feel their pain too because you're part of them...once again...thanks

 

yatsuna