whynotsin Posted November 30, 2003 Report Posted November 30, 2003 (edited) ¿Por que me miras asi? ¿Por qué tengo que ser? Un Fantasma. Estoy vacio sin ti, No tengo por que vivir. Eras como luz, Como agua Como aire Sin ti me muero, Lentamente, El sol cruel El agua sala El aire veneno ¿Y que debo hacer?, Si en tus brazos no estoy, Si en los mios no estas Mi vida tu vida Son como dos calles Juntas, Pero separada, Y como dos calles tenemos destinos differente y unicos. Lo unico que pudo hacer Es dicer adios. Edited December 1, 2003 by whynotsin Quote
Kalypso Posted December 1, 2003 Report Posted December 1, 2003 It reminds me of two highschool sweethearts leaving to go too seperate, distant, schools. It does hurt when a loved one is gone. Yet another sad peice of work. You do have one typo you might want to revise... Eras cpmp luz, cpcp...I think you missed the o. Quote
Lady Celes Crusader Posted December 1, 2003 Report Posted December 1, 2003 By what I could decipher, it sounded tragic. I would like a translation thought, it'll help me to fully appreciate the poem. Quote
whynotsin Posted December 1, 2003 Author Report Posted December 1, 2003 Why do you look at me like that? Why must I be? A ghost, I’m empty with out you. I’ve no reason to live. You were like light, Like water, Like air. With out you I die, Slowly The sun cruel The water salty The air poison And what should I do? If in your arms I’m not, If I my arms you are not. My life, your life Are like two roads Together But separate And like two roads we have different destinations different and unique The only thing I can do. Is say good-bye. Quote
Lady Celes Crusader Posted December 3, 2003 Report Posted December 3, 2003 Thanks. Very touching indeed. Quote
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