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Life.

 

 

You hold in your hands

Something truly dear.

A life growing,

Yes it was thrust into your life.

A sudden jolt.

But please hold on and bring her in.

Then let her go.

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I think this is about raising a kid, Brother Andino, but I don't know. If it is, then you just summed up the entire eighteen years in a short little poem. If not... I don't know.

 

An easy read and a good one nonetheless.

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thanks brother simmers, when I wrote I didnt think about it that way but it works, I was thinking about a young girl who was pregnant and thinking of having and abortion. And that she could give the child away instead of ending a life. I like what you saw in it hope to hear more form you ol friend.

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