DarkPainInside Posted November 26, 2003 Report Posted November 26, 2003 (edited) Talk Of Life Note: i wrote this duriong a RE class Talk of love Talk of hate Talk of death Talk of fate Talk of things That are yet to be Talk of you Talk of me Talk of loss Talk of sadness Talk of suicide Talk of madness Talk of my death Talk of yours, Talk of fighting Talk of cause Talk of love Talk of hate Talk of destiny Talk of fate Edited November 26, 2003 by DarkPainInside
Yuki Kokoro Posted November 26, 2003 Report Posted November 26, 2003 This is very much a talk of life, a lot of very meaningful subjects are mentioned, you could turn each line into a poem all by itself. The "love, hate, death, fate" at the beginning versus the "love, hate, destiny, fate" at the end was an interesting choice. Purposeful? Or did it just turn out that way?
HopperWolf Posted November 26, 2003 Report Posted November 26, 2003 excellent stuff! Not much more to say than what has been already. just, well done. very cool.
Damon Inferel Posted November 26, 2003 Report Posted November 26, 2003 I talk of talk I talk of walk I talk of chalk I talk of stock I talk of ears I talk of years I talk of cheers I talk of jeers I talk of suspense I talk of two cents I talk of repents I talk of nonsense I talk of good I talk of wood I talk of should I talk of food I talk of red I talk of dead I talk of shed I talk of bread I talk of nothing I talk of something I talk of anything I talk of everything All in all, I just talk... A good poem indeed. I just had to write a bunch of nothing as well. A rather enjoyable piece, and somethign that oddly enough makes sense in some way that my brain cannot quite grasp in all of its simplistic complexity... I just wrote a review that I don't even know what it means... Good poem. ><
Beautiful Nightmare Posted November 26, 2003 Report Posted November 26, 2003 Wow cool poem ah this is what i do in RE class too the many poems that teacher has torn up on me i will never forget! Its such a boring class well with my teacher ugh! hehehehe anyway this is a really cool poem i love the struture of it and everything i just love it well done and Damon Inferel i really like your poem too
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