X-Sabre Posted November 12, 2003 Report Posted November 12, 2003 (edited) [removed due to being obscene] Edited November 28, 2003 by X-Sabre
WrenWind Posted November 12, 2003 Report Posted November 12, 2003 *hugs* I've read and reread this poem it is good yet disturbing. I'm no great poetic analyst but this one tiggers a very emotional responce. *hugs you some more*
Ayshela Posted November 12, 2003 Report Posted November 12, 2003 *hugs* i'm incredibly sorry you can't buy yourself a few blessed moments of peace in which to fall asleep. i like your repeating pattern of opening words. *hugs*
Yatsuna13 Posted November 13, 2003 Report Posted November 13, 2003 "Those who say they can't sleep, have been asleep their whole lives" This is a wonderful poem...very deep, it caught my emotions and dragged them far i have been inspired...unfortunately, because of my disorders i have not been able to sleep well either Yatsuna
Nyyark Posted November 18, 2003 Report Posted November 18, 2003 Cool structure idea, I like it alot. = )
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