DoomGaze Posted November 5, 2003 Report Posted November 5, 2003 HAIKUS ---------------------- Sun =========== Sun burns high above, Like an ocean on fire Waiting to dry up. Life of a Shadow =========== The eternal lives. Fade out until tomorrow Where they are revived. Inhale Death =========== Breathing motions kill, The spirit we've never had. Borned to die slowly. POEM ---------------------- Different Realities =========== Everything was too hard to take, All my assumptions, so farfetched. Proven that it was all so fake By meaningless drawings simply sketched. Was it so hard to do what you've done? You tore out my worthless heart, Threw it into the fiery sun. All that remains, is left to fall apart. Everything just went smoothly, But it wasn't the answer I really wanted. At least you let me go easily, Thoughts of you are now haunted. Was it so hard to do what you've done? You let me there to bleed over time. Is this your idea of fun? Your gentle let go, was to me a crime. Everything went better than great. My dreams I guess have come true. There is nothing to think of of hate, Because it's the simple fact that I'm with you. Was it so hard to do what you've done? Everything turned out okay... right? Broken until we are both gone, Struggle until we can no longer fight.
Appy Posted November 8, 2003 Report Posted November 8, 2003 *Appy applauds* very neat Haiku's, well done! (that's from an inexperienced Haiku writer btw ) The poem... I'm not exactly sure what the topic is, well.. at first you think 'obviously heart-break of some sort..' but then it changes? Well written still, flow wise, and the title was well chosen too *Appy turns around and tries to walk out the window; must be overly confused again *
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