Tralla Posted October 31, 2003 Report Posted October 31, 2003 two or three or a baker's dozen pieces of me fragmented, disjointed, not broken broken is too violent a word overlapping, conflicting, disagreeing agreeing to disagree not warring warring takes too much effort am I happy sad or somewhere in between am I a bitch or a sweetheart or something else entirely is there anything but work and school and Solitude? questions are too uncertain and so everything returns to nothing and I plod, not doggishly or mulelike but something of a hybrid both kicking and biting at anything near while craving the gentle word or soothing touch of a heart not so cold as mine. and the pieces become a puzzle i never try to sort because ignorance is bliss puzzles take too much time and questions are too uncertain and all returns to nothing Nothing inside me swells and breathes and lives not doggish or mulelike but something else entirely grows s p r e a d s malignant until the me is consumed by the it and i am nothing.
Ayshela Posted October 31, 2003 Report Posted October 31, 2003 *hugs* broken *is* too violent a word, isn't it? and i would like to disagree, that everything returns to nothing.. but i can't. so.. *hugs*
Appy Posted October 31, 2003 Report Posted October 31, 2003 *meeps and hides under her blanky* how i know that feeling you just described... if it is what you just described... 'nothing' indeed I always like to say that I grew over it though.... too much to feel and live for, too much memories to be cherished and spit out... useless to be human without feelings no? Something like that anyways... Just that I know what you mean... never give up, keep digging inside yourself, find those parts of you that bring you the basics, the ability to be happy, the ability to mourn, the ability to stand in the storm with your chin up and without faltering... they helped me lots... maybe it works for you too Oh you just inspired me I think.. thank you for that.... and for now, chin up and keep going, loved the poem *hugs again*
Peredhil Posted October 31, 2003 Report Posted October 31, 2003 When you *feel* as if you have nothing inside - remember that at least one person in this world loves you, no matter how you feel. Hugs This is well-done, really conveys that icky feeling very well.
Beautiful Nightmare Posted November 1, 2003 Report Posted November 1, 2003 Awwwww *hugs tightly* i love it its so well written to describe those emotions and put it well simply it just leaves me in awe of you! Seriously *hugs* well done!
Falcon2001 Posted November 15, 2003 Report Posted November 15, 2003 Excellent poem Tralla, reminds me of some of my freestyle work, though much better than most of my rants
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