dragonqueen Posted October 29, 2003 Report Posted October 29, 2003 My heart's a cold and lonely place Where it rains day in day out. I wish that I could fly away To some better unknown place. But I can't. Because I've trapped myself In the walls of my mind. Too afraid to step out But not afraid to step in. And so I live a shadowed life Ever retreating further into The dark hallways of my mind.
Alaeha Posted October 29, 2003 Report Posted October 29, 2003 Reminds me of a poem I wrote once. Back in... february, I think it was. May've been March. Will have to dig that up when I've got a bit more time, and stick a link in here. This is an interesting topic to deal with.
Ayshela Posted October 29, 2003 Report Posted October 29, 2003 did you mean Darkness, or Lost in the Mind? or did i miss one?
Alaeha Posted October 29, 2003 Report Posted October 29, 2003 I think I meant the latter of those... though it may've been a bit of both. *Laughs* Our mistress of links here.... you beat me to it!
Ayshela Posted October 29, 2003 Report Posted October 29, 2003 oh! i'm sorry, i hadn't meant to keep you from looking for them, i just thought you wouldn't have time.. and i enjoy a good excuse to go delving through the archives.
Peredhil Posted October 29, 2003 Report Posted October 29, 2003 laughs at the two PMing publically in the corner, then turns and addresses Dragon Queen. I think this is well crafted - and not so much depressing as realistically representative of a certain view and attitude toward life. So much of how life looks is determined by the emotional filters through which we view it. your poem is nicely done. Hugs all three and saunters away
Ayshela Posted October 29, 2003 Report Posted October 29, 2003 giggles at Peredhil elegantly expressed. i particularly liked this: Ever retreating further into The dark hallways of my mind so exactly *right* well done.
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