Beautiful Nightmare Posted October 24, 2003 Report Posted October 24, 2003 I placed my heart in your hands Listening to all of your demands. With hope… Hope of maybe you liking me, But this will never be. You shredded my hope and my heart, You made me think you liked me from the start. A friendship alone this can be. I don’t think you realise how mean you were to me. You gave me hope when you kissed my cheek softly, Hugging me and giving your attention only to me, Saying sweet things, you gave me hope, I did not see That you never really liked me. I cry so much it hurts my head. I wish you could feel like this instead. Never trust to hope, it will lye. It makes you think things that will never be, it’s sly. I wish I didn’t feel this way, you see I actually thought you truly liked me!
DoomGaze Posted October 24, 2003 Report Posted October 24, 2003 sorry to hear that Arwen, it is a beautiful yet sad poem at the same time.. i am going through this stage as we speak, and i cling to hope, because i do believe there is. And yes doubts overwhelm the hope that is left, if there is any hope at all, but i still stay... my friends tell me to keep trying but when is enough. I personally don't want to stay in it too long, for my heart will be broken if I realized that the girl i like would rather be with someone else than me... *hugs* i know what your feeling.. your not the only one... as for me, i will hope until i know for sure that no hope remains...
Appy Posted October 25, 2003 Report Posted October 25, 2003 *huggles* even though you'll probably won't read this until wednesday .. great piece hun, like doomgaze already said, sad and beautiful at the same time. Nice work! And you know what I think... we'll help, trust on that *hugs*
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