Loki Wyrd Posted October 22, 2003 Report Posted October 22, 2003 (edited) Sometimes I wonder How it is We've come to blunder Into a world like this; Crippled by fear and hate, We live like animals, but for change It is never too late. We think our civilization is great As we are, Even being permeated with hate, And so plagued by war; It seems we can not live in peace, But wouldn't it be nice? We could give it a try at the very least. How is it this world can stay so Full of fear? We let it rule us, you know It should have no place here; One day I hope that we shall be Living without fear, And living all are days carefree. Edited October 22, 2003 by Loki Wyrd
Zariah Posted October 22, 2003 Report Posted October 22, 2003 I hope so too, and I appreciate your thoughts in poetic form! Nicely written.
Appy Posted October 23, 2003 Report Posted October 23, 2003 You are improving in my opinion, though I liked your ramblings more... still well done
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