DarkPainInside Posted October 20, 2003 Report Posted October 20, 2003 OK, this first poem is a work in progress, and the second one is for Morbid...and really anyone else who wants it to apply to them! lol Why do we live at all? Pain seeps, Blood drops, Darkness creeps, Hearts stop, Children leave Rebels run; Mothers grieve The moon follows the sun. A boy in a gutter lies still. Computers crash, Humans kill, Poison ivy leaves a rash, Kids cry, Bombs fall, Youth die, Why do we live at all? ***************** Because you support me, The days When I feel it too, You’re my guardian angel And I’d be sad if you never knew; The days I cut my self, I days I cried, The days I felt I had to run away, And hide; You are there, Telling me you care. You are too precious to loose, The wrong path; please don’t choose You’re the only one I feel who understands me The only one who knows what its like not to be free.
Ayshela Posted October 20, 2003 Report Posted October 20, 2003 *sad smile* i think you might find there are a lot more than you know, who know what it's like. *hugs*
Beautiful Nightmare Posted October 20, 2003 Report Posted October 20, 2003 I agree with Ayshela! I know that there are people out there who know what its like although i do know that when you are like that you feel like you are the only one! Like both your poems hun well done!!
Zariah Posted October 20, 2003 Report Posted October 20, 2003 (edited) Joyfulness grows Love can unite Happiness flows Hands hold you tight Babies are born, Sinners repent; There comes a new morn', After each sun is spent. To help one another We offer our care For sister and brother We’ll always be there Here at the Pen we are always there for each other. Hopefully, that is something that can be used as a reply to "Why do we live at all?" To be there for each other and to live according to our higher power (if you have one). Edited October 20, 2003 by Zariah
Guest Illuminator Posted October 20, 2003 Report Posted October 20, 2003 That's right. And I liked the second poem too!
Guest Morbid Angel Posted October 22, 2003 Report Posted October 22, 2003 I liked your first poem....nice. Thanks for the second...........remember U r 2 precious 2 ME 2 lose!luv ya Morbid Angel
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