Kalypso Posted October 9, 2003 Report Posted October 9, 2003 Good Times Airy headed people dancing to and fro. Glazed eyes of elation help illuminate a glow. Dancing feet, tapping out a beat, Melodious rhymes entertain smiling mimes. Booming energy leads the elite from their seats. Good times halt as the big tower chimes. Heads hang low as people start to go, Trailing memoirs of happiness in their tow.
Zariah Posted October 9, 2003 Report Posted October 9, 2003 It's like many Cinderellas at a hip European dance club who must leave by the strike of midnight. I like the mood and how with just the discriptions of movement, an entire scene comes to life.
Beautiful Nightmare Posted October 9, 2003 Report Posted October 9, 2003 O i like i like!!!!! It for some reason reminds me of the so cool Metallica concert i went to which i will never forget it was one of the best days of my life! And this poem brought back all those happy membories! *hugs* I like it alot!
Parmenion Posted October 9, 2003 Report Posted October 9, 2003 I want to go out clubbing after reading that!!
Kalypso Posted October 9, 2003 Author Report Posted October 9, 2003 I'm glad everyone seems to enjoy it. Thank you for the comments, they mean a lot.
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