Kalypso Posted October 8, 2003 Report Posted October 8, 2003 Author's note: This is just a short dalliance of mine. It's not meant to be a great work, I just thought it was kind of cute. It's okay if you think it's corny, I kind of think so too! I just thought someone might enjoy something light. An exotic enchantress glides weightless over a mead of mayflowers. As she's gallivanting she notices a young gent spying her solitary dance. As she draws near to inquire about his nosey tendencies she notices he has something cupped between his hands. “If you're not too absorbed in your ostensible observations, I’d like to know what you hold?” “It is a bee milady. “ “Surely you must be crack-brained to capture an insect that stings? “ “A sting is but a small price to pay for what I gain. “ “And what is it you think you're gaining sir? “ “A vision... that will lovingly haunt my eyes until death. A gift... so gratifying the mere thought of its existence is excuse enough to pursue it solely. Simply, a second glance is the sweetest nectar tasted in an otherwise drab world. “ “What does the bee have to do with this revelation of yours? “ “I'm surprised you of all people should ask that milady. “ “Why should my questions surprise you my roguish riddle-master? You talk in tangles! Please put forth your point! “ “Of course milady...Beauty is in the eyes of the bee-holder.
Ayshela Posted October 8, 2003 Report Posted October 8, 2003 *groooooaaannn* a shaggy dog if ever i saw one... and punny to boot! LOL
Zariah Posted October 8, 2003 Report Posted October 8, 2003 Excellent, excellent! Quite a stinger! Perhaps your story will be the buzzz around the Assembly room. It may BUG many, but Bee-lieve me, honey, it was clever!
Savannah Posted October 8, 2003 Report Posted October 8, 2003 *laughs as she reads* Totally wonderful!!
Rhapsody Posted October 10, 2003 Report Posted October 10, 2003 (edited) Lol, how adorable! BTW, Kalyso, I love how you took your name after the leader of the Muses! Edited October 10, 2003 by Rhapsody
Regel Posted October 12, 2003 Report Posted October 12, 2003 I the words of Austin Powers "Oh BEEhave!!"
Kalypso Posted October 12, 2003 Author Report Posted October 12, 2003 Rhapsody, thank you for the compliment. You're very sweet. Just so you know I derived my name from Homer's Odyssey. She was the sea nymph who kept Odysseus on her island for seven years. I don't really admire the charactor, I just really loved the name, although Homer wrote it as Calypso. The muses are named the following: Calliope Clio Euterpe Melpomene Terpsichore Erato Polyhymnia Urania Thalia I'm happy most seem to enjoy this piece. I'm pleasantly surprised. I think you're all being too kind!
Hot Soup Posted November 18, 2003 Report Posted November 18, 2003 Author's note: This is just a short dalliance of mine. It's not meant to be a great work, I just thought it was kind of cute. It's okay if you think it's corny, I kind of think so too! I just thought someone might enjoy something light. An exotic enchantress glides weightless over a mead of mayflowers. As she's gallivanting she notices a young gent spying her solitary dance. As she draws near to inquire about his nosey tendencies she notices he has something cupped between his hands. “If you're not too absorbed in your ostensible observations, I’d like to know what you hold?” “It is a bee milady. “ “Surely you must be crack-brained to capture an insect that stings? “ “A sting is but a small price to pay for what I gain. “ “And what is it you think you're gaining sir? “ “A vision... that will lovingly haunt my eyes until death. A gift... so gratifying the mere thought of its existence is excuse enough to pursue it solely. Simply, a second glance is the sweetest nectar tasted in an otherwise drab world. “ “What does the bee have to do with this revelation of yours? “ “I'm surprised you of all people should ask that milady. “ “Why should my questions surprise you my roguish riddle-master? You talk in tangles! Please put forth your point! “ “Of course milady...Beauty is in the eyes of the bee-holder. Loved it. Did not see that coming. I really enjoyed it.
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