Lashienne Andvari Posted October 7, 2003 Report Posted October 7, 2003 Alone Standing by myself, this is what you've left me... Nothing Cradled in my hands, are the pieces that remain... Shattered Crying as you pull away, trying to bring you back... Begging Please don't leave me, I don't want to be... Alone
Ayshela Posted October 7, 2003 Report Posted October 7, 2003 Nicely written and i think a goodly number here could relate <_>
Parmenion Posted October 7, 2003 Report Posted October 7, 2003 Very orihinal. Liked the palindrome (spelling?) kinda effect it had going on coupled with the snap-shot views of the end of a relationship. Very real feeling and very clever idea, well done!
Peredhil Posted October 8, 2003 Report Posted October 8, 2003 Fear of being alone is one of the top five fears in America, according to a census a few years ago. Right after Fear of public speaking, and above fear of death. You must be in good company
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