Guest Morbid Angel Posted October 7, 2003 Report Posted October 7, 2003 **What you reckon.......does it kinda lose direction a bit?** Can't sleep Through the silent tears I weep. Can't get out of bed The message gets lost in my head. How sweet life'd be If only he'd let me be free. How good it would feel to not have a care I am not brave enough, so I do not dare. If I knew I could not fail Maybe I would not dream of sleeping on the train rail. If I knew he would not be mad I would not go home sad. Instead of nightmares,I wish for dreams So I would not wake up the neighbourhood with my fearful screams. My biggest wish is, for a life That would not be worthy of a knife.
Ayshela Posted October 7, 2003 Report Posted October 7, 2003 i don't think it really loses direction, but the extended second lines of the last verses do interrupt the flow which makes it *feel* as if it loses direction. *hugs*
Parmenion Posted October 7, 2003 Report Posted October 7, 2003 Still bared, When all the times that I cared, Secrets that I couldn't keep, In shaking hands I would weep. If easy life could be, Had I kept her here with me. How good it would feel to be more aware, Not smart enough, too easy to scare. Alone always dreamt of success, Without you its nothing more than duress, If me you had waited to save, This home would be more than a cave. But though I did that back then, You hated me for a time but when... You met another young lad, And now you've never been sad. Loved yours and had to respond in a similar fashion. Thank you for inspiring me
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