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Posted (edited)

Faded Tommorows

If your computer died today

Would there be a tommorow?

If your life should fade away

Would anyone know sorrow?

 

You were so far away

In some distant land

Never logged on yesterday

Not today, nor tommorow?

 

Friends come and go

And sometimes fade away

Where goes

Today?

 

I dont know

 

I light a candle for you today

And another will follow

In hope to meet again

In some faded tommorow.

Edited by Valdar and Astralis
Posted

This is for all those who vanished offline, never to be seen again. leaving friends wondering, never knowing the whole truth. Are they living happily ever after? Were they evicted and peniless? Or did they slip from this life when we were not looking?

 

We may never know, but we can hope and pray.

Posted

/me nods

 

There are always those who simply disappear into that big bad world of no computers and sometimes no communication. This was a great tribute to their memories Valdar!

 

/me hugs Appy and crais on her shoulder asking where Lizzie is! *sniff*

 

:wolf:

Posted (edited)

Wow, I really liked the concept here, speaking to those no longer here.

 

I light a candle for you today

Fave line.

 

And I like the title: Virtual Shapes. Really gets your point across.

Edited by Rhapsody
Posted

*Appy pets Parmenion on his back and hugs* I hear ya, I miss her too..

 

Great poetry Valdar... so many lost in the land of memories indeed..

 

*wonders what happened to Invincebel and several others and shakes her head sadly*

Posted

I would not have thought one could write a serious beautiful somewhat sad poem to all those people who vanish whether slowly or quickly. I'm glad I was wrong.

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