DoomGaze Posted September 29, 2003 Report Posted September 29, 2003 Opposites Attract ================= Scorched earth, Sparks fly. Wingless birds Stubbornly die. Summer's snow, Dry rain. Night illuminates Stars drained. Breathless wind Stealing life, Fearless death, Painless strife. Vacant staring Mirrorless reflections. Illusionary realities, Lost directions. Opposites attracting. Endlessly beginning, Beginning's end, Until nothing.
Ayshela Posted October 3, 2003 Report Posted October 3, 2003 i hadn't posted on this simply because finding coherent thoughts has been a remarkable strain of late. However, seeing this sitting here uncommented on disturbs me. i'm honestly not sure, at this point, that i really understand where you're going with this. And yet, there is much that i appreciate about it the third stanza as a whole and Illusionary realities,in particular. i like this. it's an interesting view of sometimes paradoxical opposites - and yet, sometimes those things are the most real, and the most sensible.
Chanz Posted October 4, 2003 Report Posted October 4, 2003 i liked this one alot- don't ask me, but 4 some reason it was kind of refreshing for me! Nice Job
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