Marishka Lyn Posted September 23, 2003 Report Share Posted September 23, 2003 (edited) Do it to me again she said; The lies blossom so beautifully, I'm almost beginning to believe them now, She cries into a bottle each time he goes, she knows his destination and what he's going to do, Shutting down again, It's easier to go blind than just to go. How many have you had this time? I'm such a hypocrite, he sighs He stops to think of how far they've come, how much they've fallen, for each other and old habits, hating more, what it's done to them Addiction, Obsession, Compulsion, losing herself with each shot she takes, Addiction, Obsession, Compulsion killing himself with each hit he takes, Such a tragic pair, this boy and girl, Shutting down again, they both know, it's easier to go blind than just go. damned typos....*sulks* Edited September 23, 2003 by Marishka Lyn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loki Wyrd Posted September 23, 2003 Report Share Posted September 23, 2003 Hmm...interesting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ayshela Posted October 3, 2003 Report Share Posted October 3, 2003 *nod* it is. made easier, most often, with someone or something OUTside yourself you feel worth the price you pay for leaving. but then, if you felt yourself worth the price, you'd not still be there. *sigh* nicely done. i hope to see much more of your writing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted October 3, 2003 Report Share Posted October 3, 2003 I like well-written poems that tell a story or scenario. This was interesting reading. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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